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Haiku for February

March 10, 2014 § 8 Comments

Spiders weave in mist

Maple leaves curl on long grass

Witnessing all life

Tagged: creative writing, haiku

§ 8 Responses to Haiku for February

mikesteeden says:

March 10, 2014 at 1:13 pm

Clever stuff – a picture duly painted with words that stand alone.

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- Rachael Charmley says:
  
  March 10, 2014 at 1:59 pm
  
  Thanks Mike, I really like this simple form..
  
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  - mikesteeden says:
    
    March 10, 2014 at 2:45 pm
    
    Have you checked out Paul Lenzi blog – I think maybe it would appeal.
    
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    - Rachael Charmley says:
      
      March 10, 2014 at 5:19 pm
      
      Thanks Mike. I will. 🙂
      
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greenmackenzie says:

March 11, 2014 at 1:18 am

Beautiful words and captivating image 🙂

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- Rachael Charmley says:
  
  March 11, 2014 at 9:14 am
  
  Thank you. I really enjoyed creating this. 🙂
  
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Miranda Stone says:

March 11, 2014 at 5:27 am

This is exquisite, Rachael! You’ve been hiding your light under a barrel when it comes to writing haiku. And I love the photograph accompanying it. Simply gorgeous.

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- Rachael Charmley says:
  
  March 11, 2014 at 9:17 am
  
  So pleased you like my first attempt. I love the sparseness and simplicity of this form.
  
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