Creative Writing and unfinished business…
March 12, 2014 § 6 Comments
Winds savage mountain
Icy clouds cover pure snow
Soon ptarmigan nest
Tagged: haiku, mountain, poem, snow
This is lovely, Ptarmigan are wonderful. I am really enjoying your haiku 🙂
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Hey – thanks! It’s really freeing me up somehow, and looking at the value of each word is encouraging me to write much more clearly. Loving it! 🙂
PS. All the best with getting out there with the freelancing. x
That sounds great. And thanks, I just thought the site should reflect the freelance aspect of my writing, I have a few commissions on the go and you never know who else is reading 🙂
This is simply perfect, Rachael. Seriously, if people want to read an example of an ideal haiku, they need look no further than this one. Just beautiful.
Agreed, it is wonderful.
Thank you, dear friend – I’m hoping it’s not simply beginners luck! I copied what I hoped was the spirit and simplicity of yours. 🙂
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