Creative Writing and unfinished business…
March 25, 2014 § 11 Comments
After he left her
she threw away his letters –
then learned how to dance
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
Yay! Dance, dance. Thank you for the redemption and the beauty. xo
Thank you. It was you who gave me the last line…
Oh, my. I am deeply touched and honored. Thank you.
Lovely contrast between the perception of freedom (the dance) and the earthly restraints (the letters).
Thanks Chris.I’m so enjoying writing these haiku 🙂
I love the freedom this haiku conveys, Rachael–particularly that last line. Powerful and moving. I also admire how you’re able to tell a story in just 17 syllables. Beautifully written, my friend.
Thanks, Miranda. As always, your encouragement is infallible.
Oh wow 🙂
Pleased it did it for you 🙂
I love this! 😀
Thank you! :-))
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