Creative Writing and unfinished business…
April 4, 2014 § 4 Comments
white stitchwort trembles
new butterfly wings quiver –
they smell the lightning
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
Ooh, you can feel the tension in this one. Very subtly done, Rachael.
Thanks, Chris. Glad the juxtaposition worked for you 🙂
Oh, that first line just rolls off the tongue. Exquisite.
Big hug and thank you, Miranda! I always worry about the butterflies at this time of year in case they get washed away…
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