Creative Writing and unfinished business…
April 23, 2014 § 5 Comments
my cat sits bright eyed
beneath the sweet almond tree –
soon the first fledgling
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
Delightful! I wouldn’t change a word…it’s perfect…or purrrr-fect!
Wow, this one takes an ominous turn! We’re lulled into a sense of security by the bright-eyed cat and the sweet almond tree, and then we’re hit hard by that last line! Excellently constructed, Rachael.
Thank you. It brings back memories of a beautiful grey cat I once had who had some rather nasty habits, bless him!
Really like your Blog!!Ticks all the boxes.
Thank you! 🙂
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