Creative Writing and unfinished business…
April 29, 2014 § 10 Comments
cradling the wet day
between my trembling palms –
it trickles away
Image courtesy Issabelth
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
Beautiful imagery. Right on!
Yey! So pleased it hit the spot 🙂
Fabulous imagery; and how true – the tighter we try to hold on to time the quicker it is that we lose it.
Lovely, Chris. And thanks. Glad it worked for you 🙂
Lovely, Rachael! Simply perfect. What is said…exquisite. What is left unsaid for the reader to contemplate is…well…beyond words.
Thanks, Ron. That one came out of nowhere 🙂
What an original way to convey the inevitable passage of time. I love how your mind works, Rachael. You always take the reader in an unexpected direction!
I wasn’t altogether sure this worked, but it sounded good on the tongue so I let it be. The idea of water as a metaphor for time seems an interesting theme to explore.
One of my faves so far!
That’s great! Thanks 🙂
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