Creative Writing and unfinished business…
May 1, 2014 § 4 Comments
what is the chaffinch thinking
as it pecks off
the apple blossom
Tagged: apple blossom, chaffinch, haiku, poetry
Very delicate. I like the way you get the reader to visualize the chaffinch. Clever. 🙂
So pleased that you liked it! Ps. Did I read that you’re a Reiki Master btw?
Wow, such a beautiful photo, Rachael! And I like the quiet musing of this haiku.
Thanks, Miranda. The apple tree bark has a kind of silvery fungus on it which really brings the colours out. Can’t believe the weekend is here already. Have a good one. 🙂
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