Creative Writing and unfinished business…
May 11, 2014 § 10 Comments
walking by the sea
it whispers discreet advice –
then does my thinking
Tagged: haiku, poem, poetry, sea
Then, sadly, steals our best intentions! A thought-provoking poem, Rachael – love the photo too.
Thanks, Chris. I’m loving how the poem is provoking different responses. Just as it should be!
How powerfully you remind us that a reflective walk on the seashore puts our cares and concerns in perspective and gives us peace from our “thinkiness.” Beautifully composed haiku, Rachael!
Thank you, Ron. It’s a haiku I can go back to and get something different from it.
Ah, such wise words nature will share with us, if we only listen! Beautiful, my friend.
Thank you 🙂
Wonderful haiku! Thanks for sharing. Kind regards. FGM
So pleased you enjoyed it! It was one of my particularly vague ones 🙂
I love this poem – and the accompanying image!
Thank you. I’m enjoying your work too 🙂
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