Creative Writing and unfinished business…
May 27, 2014 § 2 Comments
deep inside the wood
kicking last year’s leaves about –
a white horse trots by
Photo courtesy Dan Tobin Smith
Tagged: haiku, horse, kicking leaves, poem
Talk about an unexpected twist in the third line! And of course, the contrast of a vibrant horse with the surrounding decay. These just keep getting better and better, Rachael!
Thank you! Experimenting with that last line is fun. xx
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