Creative Writing and unfinished business…
June 3, 2014 § 6 Comments
a flash of lightning
as i lie with my lover –
glow of the cat’s eyes
Tagged: cat, haiku, lightning, lover, poetry
Beautiful photos….the light on the black fur and golden eyes….you captured feline nature perfectly
The sweetness of the cat…
Another gem, Rachael! For those who think that 5-7-5 is outmoded, this haiku should cause them to think again. Excellent!
Thank you, Ron. I like the 5-7-5 way. It’s also nice to change it sometimes if it feels right!
Is that your cat, Rachael? What a gorgeous photo! And you have truly become a master at that unexpected twist in the third line.
Those last lines really do make or break!
No, she’s not my cat (I couldn’t find a name to acknowledge the image) – but it reminded me of a tiny wee female who lived and died on the farm a long time ago. 🙂
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