Creative Writing and unfinished business…
August 11, 2014 § 9 Comments
mirrored in the lake –
that last meeting
Image courtesy Gerhard Richter
Tagged: defining moment, dream, ephemeral, fountain, gerhard richter, haiku, marble column, memory, poetry
One is taken in wondering what transpired during that last meeting!! Great! ❤
So pleased it has intrigued you! ❤
Oh…what I can come up with if left to my own wondering 🙂 🙂
in the waters of our minds
Lovely and haunting work, my friend. Thank you for the inspiration, xox
Your poem got me goosebumping…
Heh–and as such a hale friend, you may be a founding member of the the Goosebumping Society. Goosebumpers United? Ok, I will stop…for now. What I also came back to say is that when I tried to comment in a linear way to your stunning poem and image: nada. Hence my poetic response…out of nowhere, or rather out of your vast inspiration…..
Very, very weird. It could be the gremlins, you know. They may not like your new word g**********g. In fact it may have offended or frightened their sensibilities so much that WP came to a juddering catastrophic halt for those crucial minutes. Having said that, we’re probably bolder and bigger than the gremlins, so I don’t care, and I will be delighted to be a founding member of such a controversial and anarchic society…
First off, I love the alliteration, because you know I’m a sucker for alliteration. 😉 Secondly, I love the mystery in your words as well. I feel like there’s a much greater story here behind these three lines. Well done, Rachael!
Thank you. I thought you’d appreciate the alliteration! There is a story in there – it grew after I’d posted – but I wonder if it’ll ever get written… 🙂
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