blue

September 17, 2014 § 8 Comments

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winter love affair

  but a memory –

  even blossom falls

~

Image courtesy Akazawa Yoshinori

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§ 8 Responses to blue

  • pi314chron says:

    Print, frame hang in a favorite nook, aim two small lamps…and enjoy forever!!!
    Alternately, frame and then give to a special friend! Gorgeous!

    Ron

    • Rachael Charmley says:

      Ha! That’s very generous of you, my friend. Maybe in twenty years …
      I have thoroughly enjoyed your last dozen or so poems. They were superb – and I do not say that often about anyone’s haiku. Apologies for not responding other than a ‘like’ – these last couple of weeks have left me overloaded 🙂

  • Miranda Stone says:

    Ah, this one evokes a sense of nostalgia. Nothing lasts forever. And what a beautiful painting! I can see how it would inspire a haiku.

    • Rachael Charmley says:

      Thank you! It is a gorgeous picture. I was thinking about failed love affairs when I found it.
      I am missing reading your pieces. Looking forward to it very much 🙂

  • mariam.rehman says:

    This is so pretty Rachael 🙂 Captures the transience so beautifully.The structure of the poem itself, it being a Haiku, demonstrates this very transience. I love how you end on ‘even blossom falls’ 🙂 Thank you for sharing!

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