Creative Writing and unfinished business…
November 15, 2014 § 6 Comments
a trembling jib…
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, hunting, patience, poetry, waiting
Very precise.. loved the poem! 🙂
Thank you. I love what I see on your blog 🙂
Especially love that first line, Rachael. I could feel my IMpatience rising :). Seriously, though, I love how you create such a powerful and palpable sense of stillness, waiting….patiently. You must be a grace-full sailor. Thank you. xoxo
Thanks, Chloe. I would like to be a grace-full sailor, but I suspect it would only happen if I were to sail alone – which I never ever have! xxx
I like how this poem tripped me up a bit and made me go back and read it again. (Of course, all of your poems are worthy of a second read!)
It’s hard to get the tripping bit right! Thank you, Miranda 🙂
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