trust

November 24, 2014 § 5 Comments

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first frost –

a flock of silent sparrows

waiting

~

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§ 5 Responses to trust

  • Let’s hope they don’t wait too long!!

  • Miranda Stone says:

    I love the title of this poem–it puts the words into an entirely different light. Maybe the sparrows are putting their trust in the rhythms of Mother Nature? Not sure, but I very much enjoyed this, Rachael.

    • Rachael Charmley says:

      Thank you, Miranda. I nearly didn’t post this poem as it seemed rather weak, but as you say, the title made a difference, perhaps having the function similar to the usual last line of a classic haiku. Once again, thank you, and hope all well with you.

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