Creative Writing and unfinished business…
December 18, 2014 § 6 Comments
battling the winter storm…
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry, poppies, remembering, storm
these words evoke a feeling of warmth; great work….
Thank you very much. Your comment is appreciated.
I love the ‘remembering, trembling’ lines as they conjure a host of of images. This scans really well, and keeps drawing me back. Lovely.
Thanks, Chris. I think there might be some longer poems angling to get out…
Agree with Chris–the “remembering/trembling” lines are so compelling, especially when juxtaposed with the punctuating “corn.” Lovely work, my friend. xox
Thank you, Chloe. It’s good to play with these old words 🙂 ❤ Hope Christmas preparations are shaping up nicely for you. xxx
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