Creative Writing and unfinished business…
September 28, 2016 § 6 Comments
dead mouse –
the breeze less than a whisper
in the long grass
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
Your poetry hits home so often. Just wanted to chime in and mention it.
That’s great, Ka! Thank you. I know it’s often hard to comment on a haiku 🙂
Love that image of the breeze ‘less than a whisper’.
I think I stole that idea from somewhere…:-)
Lovely – my mind went off in the grass in peace after the jolt of the mouse.
Thanks, Julie. Your appreciation is much appreciated 🙂
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