Creative Writing and unfinished business…
December 21, 2016 § 5 Comments
headlights of the train –
a moth flutters at the window
in the waiting room
Tagged: creative writing, haiku, poetry
I like the air of anticipation in this, Rachael. What promise does the train bring, I wonder?
My imagination hasn’t worked that one out yet…
Oh I love the sense I get of that echoey waiting room and the moth stuck, just like you’re stuck waiting for the train…
Glad it pleased you, Andrea. I enjoyed the open endedness of this one…
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