venus rises
May 8, 2018 § 5 Comments
venus rises –
i toss and turn
in the hotel room
~
image courtesy joe rao
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Very much a metaphor for rising womanhood, perhaps. A fine poem, Rachael.
Thank you, Chris. These clear nights are bringing some wonderful shows of Venus too 🙂
Indeed they are. It’ll never last!
Lovely juxtaposition between venus rising and the weight of whatever keeps us awake 🙂
Thank you 🙂